Unedited version. 2min thoughts


I was not comfortable reading first pov narration. It was very weird

Theo accepting Bianca was a bit easy. Like he was made into this simple buy and suddle he was into this kinky shit and was okay with bianca. In my opinion. Bianc's character felt ,ore fleshed out than his.

Bianca her character was well done. She alone carried the novel forward.

I wanted to see Theo more as NYPD Chief Commissioner but all he did was run after that villain J guy. Jo police action