good…just good

The story and plot are there, so is the fated mates and RH. But the author tends to repeat phrases alot and spends a lot of time going into erroneous detail about trivial things… the bathing suits, the vehicles… we got it she’s hot and wears skimpy clothes, cool. I felt like some of the scenes that could’ve proven to be very important were just rushed. She gets to school and the leaves after day one, tf? All that build up for nothing, then the whole house fight and traitor quite girl? That’s all we get?? So confused