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Antonio by Kathy Ivan
2.0
This novella is book 2 in Kathy Ivan’s Texas Boudreaux Brotherhood series. These are low angst, small town, & closed door romantic suspense.
I enjoyed this more than book 1, but still had many of the same issues with it. The writing is very repetitive, especially for such a short book. This one also had no relationship development. Antonio & Serena don’t go on a single date or even hang out for any length of time. They’re both internally monologuing about being in love with nothing in the text to explain how they got there.
I kinda liked the mystery/suspense angle but there’s several times where Serena swings from intelligent, strong, and cautious to TSTL. Unfortunately the ending was somewhat anticlimactic with a surprise character giving an info dump to wrap it up. (Which included a lot of contradictory statements.).
I wish the author would spend more time on “showing” rather than “telling” and stop having characters repeat the same full-length conversation with multiple people.
I already own the first 6 books (Chirp sale) but I’m not sure I’m going to continue.
Narration:
I enjoyed Alex Knox and Tieran Wilder.
I enjoyed this more than book 1, but still had many of the same issues with it. The writing is very repetitive, especially for such a short book. This one also had no relationship development. Antonio & Serena don’t go on a single date or even hang out for any length of time. They’re both internally monologuing about being in love with nothing in the text to explain how they got there.
I kinda liked the mystery/suspense angle but there’s several times where Serena swings from intelligent, strong, and cautious to TSTL. Unfortunately the ending was somewhat anticlimactic with a surprise character giving an info dump to wrap it up. (Which included a lot of contradictory statements.).
I wish the author would spend more time on “showing” rather than “telling” and stop having characters repeat the same full-length conversation with multiple people.
I already own the first 6 books (Chirp sale) but I’m not sure I’m going to continue.
Narration:
I enjoyed Alex Knox and Tieran Wilder.