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A review by rellimreads
Death Lake by D. K. Knight
2.0
DNF @ 80%
It’s a fairly short story but I still couldn’t finish.
Simple basic story. It needs an editor - I don’t feel I’m super picky but the typos, awkward punctuation, and switching between active & passive voice made it difficult to stay engaged.
Cover Note: I don't know if this is some kind of AI rendering or what - but the Skeleton is odd. Its sternum/ribcage is all mushed up into the skull? Or there's 20 clavicles? I thought maybe there was some reference to it in the book - but nope.
It’s a fairly short story but I still couldn’t finish.
Simple basic story. It needs an editor - I don’t feel I’m super picky but the typos, awkward punctuation, and switching between active & passive voice made it difficult to stay engaged.
Cover Note: I don't know if this is some kind of AI rendering or what - but the Skeleton is odd. Its sternum/ribcage is all mushed up into the skull? Or there's 20 clavicles? I thought maybe there was some reference to it in the book - but nope.