2nd TRY - cute, a bit convoluted, very verbose, but I liked the ending.

1st TRY - I wish there was an option to mark a book as dropped/ unfinished. I only managed to get through 4 chapters. I just didn't care to keep going. The story seemed interesting at first but then I got bogged down by the wordiness, my mind just kept switching off and it was clear at the start of chapter 5 I did not care at all.