In the beginning it was a bit repetitive and annoying the way Glory kept talking about her weight/body. I wanted to say "ok! I get it! You can stop beating the dead horse - you are not a model thin vamp!" The author finally stopped discussing it about halfway through which was nice, I could focus on the story instead of wondering when this woman with MAJOR self esteem issues would bring up her weight. It was overwhelming how cliche this seemed (I know of no one with that much hate constantly for their body) and I hope the rest of the series isn't like this. Otherwise a decent story and an interesting character.