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A review by businesscasualcowboy
His Fresh Start Cowboy by A.M. Arthur
2.5
Overall, the writing and structure of this book was poorly done. The pacing was very slow until suddenly wrapped up with paragraphs of summary. There was also A LOT of repetition of backstory, as if I needed to be reminded of the same characters and events every other chapter. And while there (weirdly) are some cis women who can write good m/m sex scenes (shout out to KJ Charles), this author is not one of them. The details were either off-putting or lacking + the action was frequently interrupted by the characters exchanging a bunch of off-topic dialogue…. Someone also needs to tell AM Arthur — it is so not hot to describe a sexual encounter as “burning” (not once, but twice!!). Hugo should talk to his doctor. Oh, and PLEASE retire the trope of — most-abusive character may actually be closeted.
All criticism aside, though, I did have a dumb smile on my face most of the time while reading this. I’m a sucker.
All criticism aside, though, I did have a dumb smile on my face most of the time while reading this. I’m a sucker.