Lmfao what??? Is this??????

Ignoring the mediocre writing, the part that I did read reeked of toxic masculinity and pick me nonsense. And that shit with the plane? Are you kidding me? I seriously thought that it was going to be a drunk dream or something. 

Also the main character (who of course has black hair and blue eyes like every other Mary Sue out there) had like 3 g&t doubles. WHICH IS 6 SHOTS. Right before getting on a plane in that dry-ass recycled air and cabin pressure. That is a one way ticket to throwing up so bad.