needs some plot work

Overall it wasn’t terrible but there are multiple points in the story that need more work, a lot more plotting and some character growth.

The FMC keeps flopping between wanting to be strong and wanting to cower. The MMC is almost good, but he too needs a bit of work.

The end felt very anticlimactic , in a way it’s a stand-alone that Carrie’s over multiple books. So the ‘end’ wasn’t technically an ending.