A review by oraclereadings
A Blue Ribbon Romance by C.M. Nascosta

2.5

 I just want to put out a quick disclaimer before moving on to the rest of the review. I am not new to monster fucking, but this is my first physical work of fiction related to the topic.

So I didn't realize that this is a sequel/retelling (different POV) to Morning Glory Milking Farm when I decided to buy this from my local bookstore.

With that being said, my entire review is going to change from my original thought.

My original thought:
No plot. No worldbuilding. Just bam, you are here.

Although, to be fair, I don't know how much of a new mindset I can add into this. Seeing as I have no intention of reading Morning Glory Milking Farm, my review isn't going to change as much as I thought.

There's no real setting. Maybe I'm spoiled but I need like every single detail on what is happening in a scene. Okay, maybe not every single detail. I don't need to know about characters going to the bathroom or anything like that. I just want to know that the characters are sitting on the couch or if we're at a coffee shop.

And none of that is clear in A Blue Ribbon Romance. One scene goes from him getting "milked" to a conversation with one of his friends and there's no clear time skip/jump or change of scenery.