This may sound like an odd criticism, but I felt like there was too much explanation of what the characters were thinking at every. single. moment. I think I would have preferred to infer the characters’ feelings from their words and deeds on occasion rather than listening to constant internal monologues. It also felt like the main characters spent a lot of time waiting around for other stuff to happen (which they filled with sex) when I really wanted the main plot to move along faster. Still, it was action-packed and inventive and definitely worth reading.