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A review by hardcover_hazel
Forbidden Love by Shalini Sharma, Shalini Sharma
sad
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
I DNF this book.
Thank you so much to the author for reaching out and sending me a review copy. That was so sweet and kind đź’–
Unfortunately, I couldn’t continue reading this book. It looks like a really great plot is there but there is a lot of editing needed still.
The way it’s written seems to contradict itself sometimes. It isn’t very descriptive. The characters aren’t written in a way to connect us to them.
There were also some aspects I couldn’t get through - Wince is not something that makes a sound.
This is all constructive criticism, with some editing I’m sure this could turn into an incredible story ❤️ there is real potential, it just needs to be worked on a bit.
Thank you again to Salini Sharma for giving me this review copy - I wish you all the best x
Thank you so much to the author for reaching out and sending me a review copy. That was so sweet and kind đź’–
Unfortunately, I couldn’t continue reading this book. It looks like a really great plot is there but there is a lot of editing needed still.
The way it’s written seems to contradict itself sometimes. It isn’t very descriptive. The characters aren’t written in a way to connect us to them.
There were also some aspects I couldn’t get through - Wince is not something that makes a sound.
This is all constructive criticism, with some editing I’m sure this could turn into an incredible story ❤️ there is real potential, it just needs to be worked on a bit.
Thank you again to Salini Sharma for giving me this review copy - I wish you all the best x
Content Warnings
Moderate: Adult/minor relationship, Child abuse, Physical abuse, and Sexual assault