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A review by outsidestar
The Cruel Prince by Holly Black
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
I don’t know what to make of this. Every possible rating has crossed my mind at some point while reading this book.
The story starts when 7 year-old Jude opens the door of her house to a strange man, who kills both her parents and then claims to be her older sister’s father. Turns out he is no man at all, but Madoc, general to the High King of the Fae, and Jude’s older sister Vivi is indeed his heir. So after killing their parents, Madoc takes Vivi, Jude and Taryn (Jude’s twin sister) to Faerie. Fast forward 10 years and that’s where chapter one takes off.
That beginning got my full attention. Human girls growing up in the land of the Fae and being raised by their parents’ killer is a story that has a lot of potential. I especially liked the fact that our protagonist isn’t “the chosen one”, it’s her sister Vivi who’s the daughter of the King’s general, Jude being taken to Faerie is just a side effect of that.
Okay, so things look promising. Then what happens during the first half of the book? A big fat nothing. We’re shown how the twins are bullied at school and how Vivi despises her father and wants to go back to the mortal world. Then Jude decides to stop bowing her head and starts fighting back instead, which somehow leads to her becoming a spy for the Crown Prince. The issue? None of this is really justified, it just sort of happens and you’re supposed to roll with it.
Then somewhere around 50% or 60% in, the coronation takes place, since the High King has decided to step down, and that’s when everything goes downhill and fun things start happening. Although I do feel that all the different courts that came together for the coronation could have been used better, or just used really, because it seems like they were just there to take up space.
So yeah, story-wise for the first half of the book there was no objective, nothing to look forward to or a reason that really kept me reading. I must say, though, that I wasn’t bored either and didn’t feel like the whole thing dragged, it was a pretty quick read. But the second half of the book was much better, since things were actually happening and there was something at stake.
Now let’s get into the characters. No one is fully likeable except maybe Vivi, which isn't a bad thing in itself, perfect characters are boring.
The story starts when 7 year-old Jude opens the door of her house to a strange man, who kills both her parents and then claims to be her older sister’s father. Turns out he is no man at all, but Madoc, general to the High King of the Fae, and Jude’s older sister Vivi is indeed his heir. So after killing their parents, Madoc takes Vivi, Jude and Taryn (Jude’s twin sister) to Faerie. Fast forward 10 years and that’s where chapter one takes off.
That beginning got my full attention. Human girls growing up in the land of the Fae and being raised by their parents’ killer is a story that has a lot of potential. I especially liked the fact that our protagonist isn’t “the chosen one”, it’s her sister Vivi who’s the daughter of the King’s general, Jude being taken to Faerie is just a side effect of that.
Okay, so things look promising. Then what happens during the first half of the book? A big fat nothing. We’re shown how the twins are bullied at school and how Vivi despises her father and wants to go back to the mortal world. Then Jude decides to stop bowing her head and starts fighting back instead, which somehow leads to her becoming a spy for the Crown Prince. The issue? None of this is really justified, it just sort of happens and you’re supposed to roll with it.
Then somewhere around 50% or 60% in, the coronation takes place, since the High King has decided to step down, and that’s when everything goes downhill and fun things start happening. Although I do feel that all the different courts that came together for the coronation could have been used better, or just used really, because it seems like they were just there to take up space.
So yeah, story-wise for the first half of the book there was no objective, nothing to look forward to or a reason that really kept me reading. I must say, though, that I wasn’t bored either and didn’t feel like the whole thing dragged, it was a pretty quick read. But the second half of the book was much better, since things were actually happening and there was something at stake.
Now let’s get into the characters. No one is fully likeable except maybe Vivi, which isn't a bad thing in itself, perfect characters are boring.
- The bullies: Valerian and Nicasia have zero depth to them. They are one-dimensional characters. I feel like I don’t know anything about them or why they act the way they do. The same would apply to Locke, though I did kinda like him in the beginning, but I don’t get him. No matter if a character is good or bad, likeable or not, you need to understand who they are and why they do things, otherwise you’re never going to feel anything other than indifference towards them. And then there’s Cardan, who pretty much changed personalities for the second half of the book. Although his motives were more or less explained, he still fell flat for me during the first half of the book. Then he became much more interesting, but he was an entirely different person. I like him better now, so I’m just going to roll with his new personality and act like the Cardan from the first half of the book didn’t happen.
- Taryn: I don’t get her. Maybe it’s me, because I don’t seem to get anyone, or just that no one’s motives were explained. I understood her character until you know what was revealed. Knowing how things work in Faerie, how could she choose him over her? She can’t really be in love with him after everything. Or maybe she’s just dumb.
- Jude: I understood and could get behind her for the most part. I get that, like Taryn, all she wants is to belong in Faerie and not feel vulnerable, I’ll even believe that one day she flipped the switch and became a rebel, but that sudden thirst for power? And how she, a mortal girl, can outwit every immortal Fae? That’s too much suspension of disbelief. But the real question is, how and when did the responsibility and weight of the world fall on Jude’s shoulders? How did she get involved in that and why does she even care? It's not something for her to worry about because she has nothing at stake. And when that something appears, it's someone I couldn't care less about.
So you can see how my thoughts are conflicted. The story itself was good, it was an entertaining read and it didn’t drag by any means but I was expecting so much more. I just wasn't investend in the whole thing. The stakes aren’t high enough, or don’t even exist, for most of the book and the characters lacked development, especially their changes in personality need to feel less like, well, changes in personality. It’s called a character arc and not a character jump for a reason.
I just feel the same way I did when reading Throne of Glass, and not because my brain seemed to be comparing everything to a SJM book (let’s not go there because there are some similarities I don’t even want to talk about), but because Throne of Glass really disappointed me (I think more than this one did) and then I ended up loving the rest of the series. So I’m just going to hope the same magic happens here.
Graphic: Bullying, Kidnapping, Death of parent, and Murder