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A review by pelicanfreak
Deadly Silence by Rebecca Zanetti
2.0
YIKES.
Warning: author thinks smex involves inserting pen!s into one's uterus.
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It was mysterious, and that bit was fun.
The steamy scenes started out hot, but then quickly took a weird turn when phrases like, “... her womb convulsed around him…” That isn’t how it works. Anyone that thinks the V and the womb are the same should probably not write sex scenes?
I ended up having to DNF when I heard that.
I realize not everyone has the same educational opportunities and I’m not judging the author for using that very poor choice of wording but … that the book reached production stage this way indicates a lack of regard for quality, especially combined with the robotic “narrator” that I’m not convinced is an actual person.
Warning: author thinks smex involves inserting pen!s into one's uterus.
***
It was mysterious, and that bit was fun.
The steamy scenes started out hot, but then quickly took a weird turn when phrases like, “... her womb convulsed around him…” That isn’t how it works. Anyone that thinks the V and the womb are the same should probably not write sex scenes?
I ended up having to DNF when I heard that.
I realize not everyone has the same educational opportunities and I’m not judging the author for using that very poor choice of wording but … that the book reached production stage this way indicates a lack of regard for quality, especially combined with the robotic “narrator” that I’m not convinced is an actual person.