Krystal Marquis delivers a compelling exploration of friendships and individual goals in More Than This, showcasing the complex dynamics among the four protagonists. The depth of their bonds and the clarity of their ambitions make the story engaging and relatable. Each protagonist shines in their own right, navigating personal challenges and striving for growth within a richly drawn setting that feels immersive and vivid.  

However, the novel falters with the introduction of new characters who lack sufficient development. The addition of new love interests, in particular, detracted from two of the protagonists’ stories, muddling their arcs and diluting the emotional stakes. A one-dimensional rival felt especially out of place and added little to the overall narrative. These elements disrupted the pacing and distracted from the stronger, more resonant aspects of the novel.  

The themes and setting are still very strong, along with the nuanced portrayal of the core group. But as a follow-up to Marquis’s previous work, this installment feels like a missed opportunity. While it still captures moments of brilliance, it struggles to maintain the cohesion and emotional depth of the first novel. if there's a third installment, I hope the series gets back on track.