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smutty_sully's review against another edition
3.0
This is a newsletter freebie, it's also sold on the author's website for 99¢.
There is also a short free book, At Your Service: A Short Alpha/Alpha Story that is free on the Bookfunnel Newsletter Builder and on Prolific. Highly recommend it, it's Dr/patient shenanigans.
Blurb:
“How can I help you?”
Jake seems ready to bolt, his fingers digging into his palms. “I got a knot stuck in my ass.”
How can you resist that?
*****
One interesting part of the plot was Dustin's noise level in bed being an issue, and the shame and anxiety it caused. A couple very uncomfortable sex scenes with Dustin being shushed or chastised for making noise with men who are not the other MC.
Other than that part, it's a pretty light read.
Highlights:
• Dustin might be as gay as the day is long, but he can’t date someone who will talk his ear off about how the breath is universal energy flowing through you and connecting you to every living thing on the planet, or some other bullshit, just because they’re hot.
• Adam’s wearing a white tank with an equally colorful image of what appears to be Buddha. There’s some text running in a half-circle that Dustin can’t read. Probably some motivational bullshit like ‘a positive mindset brings positive things’. Gag.
• In some kind of trance, Dustin does as told, rolling onto his stomach like a seal. His body has betrayed him.
• Adam smells amazing, like cinnamon and oranges. He smells like Christmas morning, and Dustin doesn’t even like Christmas, but he’s already addicted.
• “He destroys everything he touches. It’s apt.” Mr Bean rubs his face against Dustin’s leg, and Adam clucks his tongue. “Stop rubbing against him. He’s mine.”
There is also a short free book, At Your Service: A Short Alpha/Alpha Story that is free on the Bookfunnel Newsletter Builder and on Prolific. Highly recommend it, it's Dr/patient shenanigans.
Blurb:
“How can I help you?”
Jake seems ready to bolt, his fingers digging into his palms. “I got a knot stuck in my ass.”
How can you resist that?
*****
One interesting part of the plot was Dustin's noise level in bed being an issue, and the shame and anxiety it caused. A couple very uncomfortable sex scenes with Dustin being shushed or chastised for making noise with men who are not the other MC.
Other than that part, it's a pretty light read.
Highlights:
• Dustin might be as gay as the day is long, but he can’t date someone who will talk his ear off about how the breath is universal energy flowing through you and connecting you to every living thing on the planet, or some other bullshit, just because they’re hot.
• Adam’s wearing a white tank with an equally colorful image of what appears to be Buddha. There’s some text running in a half-circle that Dustin can’t read. Probably some motivational bullshit like ‘a positive mindset brings positive things’. Gag.
• In some kind of trance, Dustin does as told, rolling onto his stomach like a seal. His body has betrayed him.
• Adam smells amazing, like cinnamon and oranges. He smells like Christmas morning, and Dustin doesn’t even like Christmas, but he’s already addicted.
• “He destroys everything he touches. It’s apt.” Mr Bean rubs his face against Dustin’s leg, and Adam clucks his tongue. “Stop rubbing against him. He’s mine.”
serenity81's review
emotional
funny
hopeful
lighthearted
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Toxic relationship
books_sunshine_and_chocolate's review against another edition
challenging
emotional
funny
hopeful
inspiring
lighthearted
relaxing
sad
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
jengirlreads's review
4.0
Unraveled features our sweet and shy hero, Dustin, who starts out the tale with a complete jackhole of a boyfriend. Said loser cheats on him, and when he doesn’t feel like his usual workout, his friend Jace convinces him to try out a yoga class with him … taught by the yummy and wonderful Adam. While Dustin thinks yoga might not be for him, Adam may well be — if he can get past his own insecurities and let Adam in.
This was such a fun and sweet quick read — with just the right amount of steam and sly humor! I loved how well we got to know Dustin even though it was a short piece, and I really liked how Adam was the perfect match for him. I can’t wait to read Jace’s story next — and hopefully longer pieces from this author in the future. Definitely recommend.
This was such a fun and sweet quick read — with just the right amount of steam and sly humor! I loved how well we got to know Dustin even though it was a short piece, and I really liked how Adam was the perfect match for him. I can’t wait to read Jace’s story next — and hopefully longer pieces from this author in the future. Definitely recommend.
ashlikes's review
adventurous
funny
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.5
Graphic: Cursing and Sexual content
Moderate: Infidelity
Minor: Injury/Injury detail