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I didn’t know what to expect but I really fell in love with the unconventional writing style and Juliettes character! This dystopian story was darker than expected but I enjoyed reading it nevertheless.

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adventurous challenging dark mysterious sad tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.25

The prose in this story was delightfully unique and added much depth to Juliette’s mental state throughout the novel. However, although the writing was strong and plot seemed like it was moving forward, it somehow felt like nothing truly significant happened until the last third of the book. Up to that point, the reader spends most their time trying to understand Juliette’s circumstances and parse out the intentions of the people around her. This made the book feel meandering, and I kept wishing Mafi would have offered more clarity as to what was going on. I understand the reader is stuck with as much information as the protagonist had, which was not much in this instance, but I was left with this feeling of wanting them to get on with it already. The conclusion was definitely interesting, though, and piqued my interest in what happens next.

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3.25

“All I ever wanted was to reach out and touch another human being not just with my hands but with my heart.”

Somehow... This was exactly what I expected, yet it still surprised me. The writing is a bit... repetitive. It's very wattpad-esque. But at the same time, it was not as bad as I thought it would be. Maybe I just need something like this right now. The love triangle was actually ridiculous. And the audiobook repeating 'I am not insane' like 30 times was really trippy. But I did like the narrator and the way that this audiobook was formatted with the scratches and things like that. But anyways... yeah this wasn't good or bad, it was just a fun time ig.

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dramagirl2003's review against another edition

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dark mysterious tense fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

i sped through this in a day!

thoughts while reading

p10: it’s taken me a whole 10 pages to realise she’s writing all this down

p17: well it was either gonna be adam or kenji

p36: omg it’s uno reverse tower of babel

p45: this’ll be warner

p46: oh shit

p85: oh me the arguing is getting kinda funny considering

these two are apparently endgame. i mean i know why, cause everyone loves a good enemies to lovers, but i’m also loving trying to work out why

p93: so

we hate adam

why?

p108: warner touching her might well be because he’s attracted to her but it’s definitely a power play too. he knows she’s starved for attention and will unconsciously cling to any intimacy

p116: adam better not start power playing too. i should probably just ignore my preconceived notions based off spoilers otherwise they may spoil the experience

p120: 19? bloody hell warner must’ve had a tortured childhood to be this calculating already

p147: KENJI

p165: damn girl, you are powerful

p176: adam is so brave

p184:

WARNER CAN TOUCH HER TOO???

how?? what is the science behind this?

p222: 😂 james is really cracking me up

p254: warner is so delulu

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adventurous dark emotional tense fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

This is definitely one of my favorite books off all time! I’ve heard a lot of people saying they don’t like the writing style, but I personally found it new and interesting, really showing how Juliette’s mental state improves throughout the story. I loved Warner so much, and found him really unpredictable which I love.

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chaptermaggot's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional hopeful mysterious fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

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evarinya's review against another edition

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dark emotional funny tense fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

The Good:
It was a quick read - I managed to get through the book with surprising speed, it never felt like it dragged too much or got boring, which was very refreshing after just having read a bunch of books that just felt "too long".
Also the plot itself was... fine? Not too much yet, clearly setting up something bigger, but... it does make me want to read more!
And (spoilers for the last few chapters)

I rather liked the whole Omega Complex X-Men style idea, even if there wasn't too much done with it so far. And Kenji was fun, admittedly.

The Bad:
Some actions felt a bit contrived, like how there always seemed to miraculously be something around Juliette that would help her solve her current issue.
Also - but that's a very personal thing for me - I just don't like dystopian settings too much. Especially those that (spoiler for the last few chapters)

end up becoming "big evil group of people/fascists has all the power but small team of heroes will fight to take them down!" - too many similarities to certian space operas, I presume.

The Ugly:
I, for the love of anything, cannot understand how people hype up Warner that much. I know that there probably will be something up with him in later books, but in this book? He's just a horrible human being. With some depth, sure, and probably his own family trauma, but... That doesn't mean he should get a free pass as to how he constantly manipulated Juliette to turn into what he believes/wants her to be!
And that she partly even accepts this already just because he's good-looking and she sometimes feels sorry for him - just to then in the next paragraph be absolutely disgusted by him again... I don't know. Doesn't really make me want to root for them at all, so far.

I worry how this will turn out in the later books, as a proper redemption arc is really difficult to pull off, but I'm willing to at least check out the next book to see how things will develop.

And again, I didn't hate this book, not by a long shot - I just, perhaps, expected something a little different based on what I have seen fans of this series discuss online... But oh well. I'll see how it goes.

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adventurous dark emotional funny mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes

5.0

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