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Gold by Raven Kennedy

3 reviews

rachelharp's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

 
building a whole new world in book 5 is bold - we got some background from slade’s backstory and Malina’s fall but not enough to keep me engaged in the whole monarchy overthrow situation. It never felt like the stakes were high. I also hated that Slade became such a villain like he was honestly the worst. Also the whole Rissa thing was just annoying. QUEEN MALINA IS MY BIGGEST GRIPE!!! I was really looking forward to her redemption arc - we basically got Elsa 2.0 but all of her character growth was spurned because of a man and not on her own. Dommik came seemingly out of nowhere to make her who she was, when i feel like she could have got there on her own and it would have been better that way. I love enemies to lovers, but i wish they’d became lovers later after her own journey. It was trying too hard to be cassian/nesta but didn’t succeed in my opinion. The story really picked up the last 100 pages and I’m excited for the rest, just annoyed at this one.

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booksalacarte's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional hopeful reflective sad tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

3.5⭐️3🌶️

Book 5
Adult Romantic Fantasy
Dark Romantasy
Multi POV
King Midas Reimagining
Fae
War
Separation
Revenge
Rebellion
Secondary POV slow burn
Redemption



I waited too long and have forgotten basically everything. But I’m almost glad I did. The recap was drawn out, but by chapter 10 I remembered what I needed to remember with a few little helpful parts. But for the most part this was a slow paced book. RK was comfortable skipping long periods of time between POV chapters in her previous books… I’m not sure why this one had to include every second.

This was a heavily side character building book. It felt like filler for the over arching plot and main characters. For a 600 page book… that’s not a good thing. We get a redemption arc and romance for one character. We get Auren’s backstory. We get some world-building in the fae realm… but we don’t get resolution to anything.

There is one spicy scene between side characters and it really was out of nowhere and not good timing. At. All. Like normally grey timing… which I guess fits, but it still gave me the ick. 

There is quite a bit of repetitive internal monologue. Nothing new for the series with that.

But the ending plot twist is interesting. I will finish the series. 

The Plated Prisoner Series Book Reviews:
Gild- 4⭐️3🌶️
Glint- 4⭐️2🌶️
Gleam- 4⭐️4🌶️
Glow-3.5⭐️4+🌶️
Gold-3.5⭐️3🌶️
Goldfinch- August 29th, 2024

Thank you NetGalley and Sorcebooks Bloom Books for the eARC of this book. All opinions are my own.

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riverofhorton's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious sad tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.0

This book could have been incredible.

This book was partially set in Annwyn, which could have lead to some amazing lore and world building opportunities that the author just missed completely. Why have such a story set in a complete fantasy world, without exploring how that world works in detail?

It was the perfect opportunity for the author to explore the aftermath of abusive relationships from two different perspectives, while the abuser remained the same person. Instead it seemed like the author had forgotten about the abuse for the most part, only briefly mentioning it three or four times in the whole 672 pages.

Additionally, it did not need to be that long. So many times the events were being recapped mere pages after they had happened. I understand characters needing to know about events they weren't present for, but does the reader need to read a blow by blow account in the form of a conversation with another character? Even worse was when characters were recapping in their own head.

There is also a sex scene (the only one in this book), between Malina and the Assassin which I'm not entirely convinced was consensual, despite being portrayed as such. I am going to without a concrete judgement on that until I read the final book, however, since Midas was originally portrayed as being a saviour until that degraded over time.


There seems to be very much the Holocaust allegory in this book, as well. I'm not going to pass judgement on that, since I don't feel it's my place (as someone who isn't Jewish) to do so.
Some specific examples of things that tipped me off:
  • Auren was described as being hidden in an attic to hide her from the rulers.
  • There was constant othering and enslavement of Oreans.
  • The tyrannical rulers Annwyn see Oreans as having impure blood and lesser beings.
  • Oreans are brutalised by the rulers on a regular basis.
  • There's also a resistance which aims to overthrow these rulers and bring peace to Annwyn.
  • The resistance rescues the Oreans from their captors.
  • The rulers are attempting to invade Orea, and murder all the Oreans.
There are no doubt other examples that someone more educated than I on this subject would be able to pick up on.

There were two specific examples of confusing lore-breaking choices (or perhaps laziness) that I can think of off the top of my head. These will be explained without major plot spoilers. So for context for anyone that hasn't read the books in this series, this is high fantasy with no links to the real world, medical science in this series is somewhere around "You have a grievous wound, put this salve on it", additionally, there has been no mention of Abrahamic religions, instead preferring what seems to be a matriarchal polytheism of some description.

To the points:
  • Something rather chaotic happens, and one of the characters describes this as being 'Bedlam' which is quite a common phrase in our world. However, this word came into our vernacular from St Mary Bethlehem Hospital. Which implies both the existence of psychiatric hospitals, the existence of Christianity, as well as the existence of a place called Bethlehem in a world where not only have these things never been mentioned previously, but there is evidence to suggest the opposite.
  • At one point, a character is describing some bars on something, likening them to "the iron cages often bolted over graves to keep robbers at bay". Although I will give credit for recognising why the cages were actually used, this doesn't fit in the world. The reason those cages were needed was so people couldn't steal the bodies and sell them to anatomy schools. This only started happening in the 19th Century, and (to my knowledge) only in England and Scotland. In this book, implying a medical science vastly more advanced than it's currently stated to be, as well as there being a British Isles, which again is not only never mentioned but there is evidence against this.
I understand these are both relatively minor points within the story, and most people might not even realise the issues I've noted, however for me I found I had to put the book down, take a break and come back to it the following day.

There were also several examples of formatting and spelling errors in this book, I picked up on 4 in the last 300 or so pages of the book alone and don't doubt for a second that there are many more such errors that I missed.

Worst of all, this book didn't really add a vast amount to the overall narrative and gave the overall impression that what was originally meant to be one book has been spread over two books and so this needed a lot of filler.

Overall, I wouldn't recommend this book. I found it to be such a disappointment in so many ways. It was such a shame when the first three books to this day mean so much to me, having helped me realise and ultimately leave a relationship similar to the one Auren was in with Midas. I will go back to the first three books in the future, but now whenever I recommend the series, I specify that the first three are worth while, the fourth and fifth are just let downs. I will still be reading the next book, as stated, so I'll see how that one goes. Hopefully it gets better.

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